Tuesday, May 11, 2010
Eulogy
If I could make one suggestion to improve the course it would be this: reduce the assigned number of blog posts and increase presence of peer reviewed papers. While blog posts reduce the physical paper load of the class it does not foster the same level of writing analysis that the in class group sessions provided. Reading my words aloud to a group really helped me understand the flow of my argument and I could hear where my paper needed work.
All in all this class was an enjoyable writing class. While I did not always see the connection between lecture and lab, and often doubted any true synergy existed between the two I feel that I learned a great deal. Both teachers were enthusiastic and always had more to say than each day than the allotted time slot allowed.
A Beautiful Failure
Another way in which the written word fails to encapsulate human experience is its inability to truly capture an emotional appeal. Do not misunderstand me, I have been moved by the words of many authors. But, the true heart wrenching agony of a personal loss or the love felt for one's family can never be conveyed with simple language. As a species we have always understood that text has its limits. This is one of the reasons why emoticons, as lackluster as they are, became so popular. It is simply another attempt to embed text with meaning.
I wish that I could visit Earth several hundred years from now to see evolution of human discourse. Just as I am sure man will still be trying to supplement their ability to capture an idea, I am equally sure we shall still fall agonizingly short.
closing statements
In terms of aggregate good done by a class, this class checked out. I very much enjoyed ILS 200; it required me to excel in writing through fun and creative assignments. I enjoyed the assignments a lot actually, and I went beyond the class and stepped up my reading just so I could properly portray my rhetoric; this class helped me see how important portraying what you want to say is, and how to do it. Capturing the philosophy of why we do something is not only important for following through with action; it’s a virtue for the learning process. This was facilitated through this class: Success!
Pathos is an interesting beast. It requires a person who is delivering a message to tailor their presentation towards an appropriate audience in order to disclose their information in the way that they see fit: to lock their message in their viewers mind, just the way they want. Celebrities around the world fall victim towards this in a strange way: how they present them self. They need to be concerned with their actions on a 24/7 basis. Though this might seem unfair to an alien, it makes complete sense to a cognitive human. Google search any of these athletes salaries; with the unique accepting of A-Rod-whom only get's 6 million from his endorsements-the major athletes in the world, and especially tiger woods, derive the majority of their salaries from endorsements, or at least a substantial chunk (40 percent or more). What does this mean? These athletes are the best sales people in the world. Big name companies pay these guys copious amounts of green because they are, for one excellent at their sport, and secondly becuase they have a solid image that they can associate with their company--which in turn leads to sales. When someone like tiger-who over 80% of his salary is based off of his image-get's him self in trouble by doing something that everyone see's as extremely unethical, you better believe everyone is going to here about it. It's only right for the integrity of these companies: the companies essentially responsible for these athletes wealth. Am I saying that anyone who chooses such a profession-one in which requires public light-deserves to have everyone know each intricate detail concerning their life? No, absolutely not, but what I am saying is many athletes accept sponsorships-sponsors which choose them based off of their public image-and it is only fair to these sponsors to maintain their image.
Sunday, April 11, 2010
public discourse too pathetic?
The Politics of Pathos: Neither Good Nor Bad
While moving towards a more logically minded schema of discourse would be extraordinary it does not seem that this will be the case any time soon. Mass media outlets provide a framework for how people structure their own discourse. We are bombarded by advertisements and other forms of pathetic content literally thousands of times a day. And the way that mass media is shaped today seems to suggest that this trend will only increase in the future. So good or bad this is a framework that is here to stay.
While some may find this future bleak we must understand that this is not a new phenomenon. Throughout history civilizations usually reach a point where discourse is saturated with pathetic appeals. In the United States this has been most prevalent in politics but elsewhere across the globe many civilizations have faced the same conditions. As long as we are able to learn from other cultures (and equally importantly, our own) this is a trend that can be utilized to do tremendous good by encouraging discourse and fostering engagement.
Public Discourse
Public discourse requires a certain balance between pathos, ethos and logos. But in our current form of public discourse is pathos being used more than it should, is the balance becoming unbalanced? Some might say yes, I say it depends. It depends on your perspective. Currently it takes a lot to get people’s attention and weighting a message heavily with pathetic appeals creates something that is hard for people to ignore. Sometimes it is necessary for us to use a strong appeal towards emotion in order to get our point across.
It seems to be necessary to use a strong emotional appeal in order to send a message but should it be necessary? I believe that, in public discourse, pathos, ethos and logos, should remain in balance regardless of what grabs people’s attention. Especially in politics because when politicians use heavy emotional appeals and less logic and ethics we, as an audience, miss out on important information because politicians are only telling us stuff that appeals to our emotions and they are not telling us the whole story. It can be deceiving and honesty is something that we look for in politicians.
I think currently, pathetic appeals are too prevalent in our public discourse, it is often hard to wade through fact and fiction and playing off our emotions makes it even harder. It is too easy to use pathetic appeals to pad your messages, whether it be in politics or something else and I don’t think that is a legitimate reason for its use. When we can successfully fix the balance between pathos, ethos and logos public discourse can truly be effective.
Tuesday, April 6, 2010
The world of pathos: Tiger woods
Monday, March 15, 2010
Pet Peeve
What defines a bigwig in a corporate board meeting ostracizes him at a Phish concert. “Crunchy grooves” do not mesh with “advertainment”. My abhorrance for business speak breaking down the cubicle walls to the real world indicates my irrational dislike for phrases out of context. For example, I don’t like suburban, upper middle class kids quoting N.W.A records in their National Honors Society meetings nor corn-fed, Wisconsin bred middle schoolers talking about "shredding the gnar" like brahs and betties.
My aversion to transitional linguistics seems counter intuitive. I usually love all things liminal, or boundary straddling. Asian fusion cuisine, the emergence of extreme sports into mainstream culture, Huxley’s Brave New World and freshmen coeds.
I think my aversion to out of place colloquialisms might actually have everything to do with my love of transitionary artifacts. I love the aforementioned examples because they bridge two worlds, harmoniously finding a new niche. Snowboarding has been able to keep its soul while being pushed to new extremes in the glow of mass consumerism and Indonesian ingredients have benefited from high-end restaurateurs. Conversely, nobody benefits from hearing about “bo-go selling strategies” or “targeting Generica demographics” in the context of a rock concert.
Combining two opposing subjects creates conflict. Conflict is the foundation for any good narrative. Superman needs Lex Luther and Kryptonite; Dr. Jekyll needs Mr. Hyde; and The Giving Tree needed that greedy little kid. But, having business speak in about-the-town vernaculars takes it too far. Lastly, If I never hear the word synergy used outside of a boardroom it will be too soon.
Wednesday, March 10, 2010
Pet Peeve
Monday, March 1, 2010
"Easy = True"
It seems that logic is the language of cognitive fluency. Cognitive fluency, being how easy something is to understand, would be able to utilize logic in many ways. For one, with logic comes understanding, if something is misunderstood it must not have been logical, and the goal of having high cognitive fluency is for better understanding therefore logic and cognitive fluency go hand in hand since they both aim to achieve similar or the same goal.
I have never thought of simplicity to be something that humans lean towards but in a way it makes sense and in a way it does not and I think this article addresses both sides of that. Bennet shows this comparison by showing how disfluency can used as opposed to fluency. I like the use of this because it does not make humans seem as simplistic as they would if Bennet would have just used fluency, or simplicity, to describe the way that human minds work the best. This disfluency is used because it causes your brain to think more into something and makes you realize the opposite, or what fluency/simplicity would have made you realize. Bennet’s example of this is with writing down ways to succeed, he says that writing down 3 ways to succeed and writing down 12 ways to fail would equate in the outcome. I think this comparison is very logical because simply knowing ways to succeed gives you a mechanism to use to achieve success, but writing down many ways of failure makes one think of different situations and how one would have to solve those failures. I almost think that this would give someone more of an ability to succeed because they would be equipped to recognize failure and would then be able to fight it.
I do think that in a lot of situations though simplicity would work over disfluency. And Bennet gives examples of this and a lot of them come from media and why we buy the things we do or vote for the people we vote for as Bennet describes. Bennet later describes that we tend to lean toward things that are easier for us, for example rhymes can help us makes sense of things like the example of the aphorism where it was put into equivalent meanings but one rhymed and the other did not, the outcome was that people tended to choose the rhyming one as more true.
I thought the funniest part of the article comes at the beginning with the example of people investing in companies with simpler names. I actually think this may be a little inaccurate, it could play a bit of part but I don’t think it does entirely. I think something as important as investing money, something that can change your future, is not something that most people take or should take advantage of. However it may play a part in deciding between two things that are equivalent in every other way, because sometimes just picking one that your gut is telling you to pick is the best thing to do, and you r gut could be telling you to pick the most simplistic one.
Finally I really like the connection between fluency and familiarity, and how we sometimes strive for that familiarity in order to justify decisions that we make. People feel an attraction towards something that is familiar to them and I think that is just human nature because people become wary in situations that are unfamiliar to them because they do not know what to expect or how to handle some of those situations. The example that Bennet uses to show our appeal toward familiarity is with an experiment where people were just shown different stimuli and people choose the ones that they liked and it just so happened that the ones that people liked the most were ones that they were shown repeatedly.
Cognitive fluency goes much deeper then the surface when it comes to the way people think and people do not necessarily prefer fluency over disfluency in every situation. As we have seen it very much depends on the situation that people are in and what they want to get out of it. And maybe simplicity can be attributed to familiarity more then to itself alone. With all of this information it is easy for one to see that our minds are very complex and having concrete answer to the questions of how they think about things, how they decide or choose things, or why we make the judgments that we make is not possible.
Friday, February 26, 2010
Wednesday, February 17, 2010
Monday, February 15, 2010
Legacy of Brutality
Nowhere else in the world does an eardrum shattering, teeth chattering and gut busting assortment of gain and reverb laden chord progressions transcribed to an amp through slightly chatter-some rail humbucker pickups from a double necked, ivory fret inlaid, drop-tuned, Gibson Les Paul, Flying V style guitar –overlain with automatic rifle-esque rapid fire kicks from a dangerously taut double bass drum and the sickly melodic, half screamed tirades of a sweaty, oversexed and altogether barbaric leather-lunged crooner– garner as much reverence from a literal legion of hellish demon spawn (mostly black t-shirt clad, pasty face teenagers with the occasional jaded ex-hipster and true blooded thrash metal sociopath) as it does in the Western portion of the Scandinavian Peninsula; vengeful gods of all things “heavy” and Cthulhu, dark lord of chaos, discord, madness and patron saint of Black Metal unite to preserve Norway, the land of white face paint, fake blood and troublesome piercings!
Thursday, February 11, 2010
Emotions
Emotions are the microphone of the mind as I see it, because they deliver the message of the mind that others are unable to hear, for instance people are going to know what is going on inside your head based upon your emotions on the outside, if you are thinking good thoughts and having a positive experience in life you will act happy, if you are thinking sad thoughts, depression is sure to show, sometimes the microphone doesn’t get turned on and your emotions are in short supply, occasionally the microphone is up far too loud and your emotions blare, and unfortunately there are those times that you get all tangled up in the cord not knowing what you are feeling and confusing your audience in the meantime, but when used correctly your microphone can be just the motivation and inspiration that your audience needs.
Tuesday, February 9, 2010
to seise to exist?
Monday, February 8, 2010
"Expect the Unexpected"
“Expect the Unexpected”
To “expect the unexpected,” was a quote my father originally used to make my baseball team always stay one step ahead. Now that I'm older I realize that he was instilling in all of us, a tool that we can use for the rest of our lives. Originally the quote by Oscar Wilde reads, “To expect the unexpected shows a thoroughly modern intellect.” None of us on the team even knew who Oscar Wilde was at the time. Back then, we thought the quote only applied to baseball. To us it meant to never expect everything to go as planned. Errors are always bound to happen in baseball, so a player should think ahead about what to do to counter those errors in the event one takes place. If we were always thinking ahead and expecting the unexpected, then we would be better baseball players. Now my baseball years are long gone, but I can still fully appreciate the meaning of the quote when dealing with the curve balls life can throw at you at any given moment. I've realized that baseball is just a very elementary level for this quote, and only when you apply it to everyday life can you fully appreciate the entire meaning behind the brief phrase.
In a nut shell, to “expect the unexpected,” is to be prepared for every situation. People cannot live their lives believing everything is going to unfold perfectly to plan. Instincts definitely help, but instincts come more with experience, and a lot of times experience alone cannot prepare people for the crazy situations life can throw at you. Someone with “modern intellect,” as Oscar Wilde would describe, is an individual who has a plan when things go haywire, or in other words have the ability to adapt in unexpected situations. One who can see alternative solutions to alternative outcomes is a true intellectual. Some people may assume that to “expect the unexpected,” is to have a plan for every possible outcome, but this is not necessarily true. The ability to adapt is crucial because one cannot possibly derive every possible outcome of every possible situation. The idea and lesson behind the quote is both true and necessary in the pursuit of success. Though a little cliché, it becomes evident that this quote can be used in an endless variety of life situations. To “expect the unexpected,” is a brief phrase that encompasses an overwhelming truth, and any individual living by this code truly possesses “modern intellect.”
As far as style goes, the quote displays deductive logic, where the premise of truth is validated through the trial and error of all humans both past and present. Also, its use of repetition provides an interesting play on words. “Expect,” and “unexpected,” may sound the same, but these words completely contrast each other. This repetition is meant to emphasize and possibly even dramatize the meaning behind the quote. Although the idea of the quote is somewhat cliché, the words used to emphasize the idea are both fresh and witty. The word choice also leads to alternative conclusions such that if one truly does expect the unexpected, then aren't they assuming they ultimately have a solution no matter what? Is it possible to truly take into account all possible unexpected outcomes and have reactions for each of them, or does expecting the unexpected have more to do with one's flexibility in unfamiliar territory? As I explained before, I am a proponent of the ability to adapt as the quotes ultimate meaning. The quote can be seen many ways, and used in a wide variety of situations, but it is ultimately up to each person to make it their own.
Sunday, February 7, 2010
Walking with Friends...
This quote is by Helen Keller and knowing that, it can take on a whole other meaning. To me in this case it means that Helen Keller would rather be blind and have a friend to go through life then to be able to see, but have no friends. Keller is physically walking through the dark, and with no amount of light would she give up her friends. It is important to understand that even though Keller is “walking in the dark” physically, it is also mental. She is on a mental journey of the mind it is extremely difficult, so having a friend with her to aid her in that journey is also crucial.
I also think it is important to realize that this quote mentions nothing about actually finding an end, because many have heard before that it is not about the destination, it is about the journey. And think in a way this quote is sort of rewriting that. The ones who think only of the destination are likely to go about it in the light and alone. But those who value the journey and learning on the way would rather be in good company regardless if they are fully aware of where there steps will take them.
I think the word choice is also very important in this quote. I like the choice of the word “walking” because to me it is more of place holder for anything you would want to insert there, and it really could be any number of things, it is left up to the interpretation. It could be interpreted by saying “Traveling…,” “Growing…,” “Learning…,” or maybe “Exploring…” It allows the imagination of the reader to turn this saying into whatever he or she needs it to be. Walking in the dark does not get solved by being with someone else, but it makes it easier to figure things out when you have two people there. So instead you have two blind people putting their heads together trying to sort through this “dark” place. In the second part of the quote “light” signifies and end or solution, and that it is “better” to not know where you are headed or how to get there as long as you are with a friend then it is to know exactly where you are going and how to get there but to be alone.
People are dependent on other people. Nobody’s life is fulfilled unless they have friends that help them or are helped. Inductive reasoning is used in this quote by showing us how to go through life. From past experiences it has shown us that we rely on other people and nobody can or even should be or act alone.
The tone of this quote, I think, is empowering. It shows that why should anyone have to go through life alone, when you in reality it is much better to have a friend to assist you and for you to assist them. The sacrifice of knowing where you are going is worthwhile and necessary when comparing whether to have friendship or to be alone. It is inspirational and one is wise to follow it. The diction of this quote is important, because in order to induce a tone of empowerment, the words need to be understandable to greater audience and something that people can relate to, so it does not have a high diction and I think it makes it easier to relate to in that sense. Many people have a lot of pride and think they are capable of doing things alone, and that’s ok if you know what you are doing. But think about whether or not you really do know what you are doing because what if you ended up walking through the dark alone.
V for vendetta
I, Like God, do not play with dice and do not believe in coincidence.
This fantastic introspective quotation was derived from the film, V for Vendetta (based off of Alan Moores graphic Novel). This idiom posse’s inductive logic. It was originally coined in the film as a que to the spectators that, the similarities in V’s and EVE’s (The two protagonists in the film) names are not just a silly coincidence, but rather a symbolic meeting of two different people uniting in pursuit of a bigger image, and perhaps the meeting of soul mates. And for me, it’s also the way I apply this little piece of Buddha intellect: as an explanation that certain events might not make sense in the present time, but they still posses context.
This quote was presented and highlighted through spectics. Because “V” is a fictional character, clearly this thought was not derived from himself, but derived from the author’s ideas, Mr. Alan Moore. If Alan Moore, released a statement like this, on a web posting or a blog, it might facilitate creative sparks with whoever reads it, there inlies the problem. From Alan Moore this quote would be quickly forgotten. But, coming from the fictional character V- a freedom fighter from one of the higher selling graphic novels of all time, and a character from the same Blockbuster movie- this quote will be heard numerous times, and becomes something more to its viewers like me. So although this quote may be emphasized and highly marketed through a spectic crazy superhero who harnesses a Guy Fox mask (Guy Fox attempted to blow up Parliament some time ago), it still has meaning and power.
The reason that I like this quote is because it combines many different idioms, “Everything happens for a reason,” “Everyone one has there own unique path.” V’s quote is certainly not the genisis of these idioms, henceforth it they cannot be derived from V’s quote. However, because Mr. Alan More, did such a fantastic job in combining these idealistic ideas into one phrase, I do see the dice quotation as a negative derivative function, (from quotations like “everything happens for a reason,” a true base was reversely derived). Lastly to me, this quote provides hope. Given that god exists, it gives us hope that we have all have a plan and a purpose.
Saturday, February 6, 2010
"Ending is Better Than Mending"
Huxley Knows How to Get Under My Skin…In a Good Way
Musings on Thought Terminating Clichés
My background in writing has always taught me to treat clichés as taboo, a cardinal sin tarnishing your journalistic credibility. However, clichés and especially thought-terminating clichés have always been of particular interest to me. A thought-terminating cliché is a saying that dismisses dissenting opinions or validates improper logic, often employed in a clever or almost lyrical sentence structure. Examples of this include sayings like: “an apple a day keeps the doctor away”, “the Lord giveth and the Lord taketh away” and “if you’re not with us you’re against us”.
Simple and memorable sayings like this can punctuate narratives and introduce incredibly pleasing rhythms. Aldous Huxley makes extensive use of this type of saying in one of my favorite books, Brave New World. Huxley creates so many catchy little phrases it is almost impossible to choose a singular favorite. One of the more memorable examples of this type of phrase is, “ending is better than mending” (pg. 49, 2006 edition).
To understand the nuances of this saying a little context must be given first. Brave New World is Aldous Huxley’s critique of the way modern civilization is continually trending towards an increasingly unabashed adoption of pain avoidance and consumerism. He does this by creating a dystopian world government set in the distant future where “everyone belongs to everyone else” and the entire system is founded on industrialism and fed by constant consumption. “Ending is better than mending” is a term that epitomizes this schema; the whole system relies on production so it is integral that the upper echelons of this government create a throwaway culture.
“Ending is better than mending”, like most of the phrases in the book, is a short and memorable phrase. Phrases like this usually rely on a simple rhyming scheme to increase their validity. This validation is achieved through the phrases ability to be easily remembered and subsequently repeated. Constant repetition is a way to drive in the subject matter, to the point where it seems second nature and above criticism.
At least that is the purpose of these types of sayings in the novel. However, when I hear singsong phrases like this they produce almost the opposite effect. Not simply the catchy ones, but the entire menagerie of thought terminating clichés, feel incredibly hollow to me. While many of them are so ingrained in daily life that people rarely notice them, I cannot help but prick up at their dismissive and often insubstantial level of analysis.
I must be in the minority because these types of trivializing comments have been around for centuries, despite how much they perturb me at present (maybe it is the masochist in me but this is also why I have find them enthrallingly interesting as well). They have successfully permeated all forms of discourse. They adorn signs of support and protest at liberal and conservative rallies alike. They can be found emblazoned throughout children’s stories concerning fluffy bunnys, in pamphlets proselytizing hatred or simply serving as the catchphrases of popular T.V. characters.
Their wide use and extensive reach is founded in their effectiveness in spreading rhetoric; as in ”(in writing or speech) the undue use of exaggeration or display; bombast” or ”the art of influencing the thought and conduct of an audience” and not “the art or science of all specialized literary uses of language in prose or verse, including the figures of speech” (dictionary.com). These types of phrases just brim with possible applications.
Despite my chagrin I must admit that phrases like “ending is better than mending” have a definite time and place. Like in children’s shows or forums where complicated discourse is difficult. Juxtaposed, these types of sayings should have no home in a political, philosophical or educational setting. Discourse is a necessary part of any society and one sentence cannot substitute for a fully thought out argument. While it is able to synthesize a main point into a key phrase its prevalent usage is alarming. If I may be permitted to use a thought terminating cliché to end my tirade as well as denounce thought terminating clichés, it would have to be: thought terminating clichés are bad!
While I feel that I may have strayed too far from my original saying: “ending is better than mending”, it is my humble opinion that Aldous Huxley would forgive me. I think he would enjoy my quibbling with abridged discourse and applaud my efforts. Hopefully my blog moderator does as well.